Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-aigp-16
review-ietf-idr-aigp-16-genart-lc-romascanu-2014-04-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-aigp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-04-08
Requested 2014-03-27
Authors Prodosh Mohapatra , Rex Fernando , Eric C. Rosen , Jim Uttaro
I-D last updated 2014-04-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -16 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -17 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -14 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Stefan Winter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-aigp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 16 (document currently at 18)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-04-02
review-ietf-idr-aigp-16-genart-lc-romascanu-2014-04-02-00

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-aigp-16

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 4/2/14

IETF LC End Date: 4/8/14

IESG Telechat date: (if known)



Summary:



Ready



Major issues:



None



Minor issues:



None



Nits/editorial comments:



In Section 3.4.1 in page 8:



Ø



The AIGP attribute may be added only to routes that satisfy one of the
following conditions:



It seems to me that in order to be consistent with similar statements in the
same section the ‘may’ here needs to be a capitalized RFC 2119 MAY