Telechat Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry-04
review-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry-04-intdir-telechat-chown-2021-12-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2021-12-01
Requested 2021-12-01
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Christoph Loibl
I-D last updated 2021-12-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -03 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -04 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/ul35Eqhi4-EHu8QBomkPlA90S5U
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-12-01
review-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry-04-intdir-telechat-chown-2021-12-01-00
Hi,

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ext-com-registry-04. These comments were written primarily
for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and
shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments
from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last
Call comments that have been received.

For more details on the INT Directorate,
see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

The draft updates various registries to change the “Experimental use”
registration procedure for certain entries given their current practical use.

The document is well-written, concise and easy to follow.

Based on my review, the document is Ready for publication, with just one
suggestion / nit to consider.

Nit:
The edits proposed to
https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/bgp-extended-communities.xhtml
appear correct.

I would suggest adding this explicit link to the draft, for clarity, rather
than just saying “to the registry” assuming readers will find it easily.

Tim