Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21
review-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21-genart-lc-yee-2018-06-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 27)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-06-12
Requested 2018-05-29
Authors Stefano Previdi , Clarence Filsfils , Acee Lindem , Arjun Sreekantiah , Hannes Gredler
I-D last updated 2018-06-13
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Bruno Decraene (diff)
Secdir Early review of -13 by Brian Weis (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -11 by Tony Przygienda (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -21 by Bruno Decraene (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -21 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 27)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-06-13
review-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21-genart-lc-yee-2018-06-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2018-06-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication, although there are a few nits
that should be corrected prior to publication.  I am not a routing expert, so I
cannot vouch for the correctness of this specification, but it otherwise
appears consistent and reflect s the many iterations it has undergone.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

General:

Expand uncommon acronyms on first use.  (See:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt.).  Acronyms need
expansion include: AS, ECMP, and EBGP.

Specific:

Page 3, 7th paragraph, last sentence: actually, this isn’t a complete sentence.
 I’m not sure what you wanted to do with the fragment.

Page 5, 2nd full paragraph, last sentence: change “prefix-SID” to “BGP
Prefix-SID” to make usage in the remainder of the document.

Page 7, Section 3.2, 2nd bullet item: insert “positive” before “multiple”.

Page 9, last paragraph, 1st sentence: delete “to”.

Page 12, 1st paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, last
sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.

Page 12, 2nd paragraph after the (unlabeled) Value/Type/Reference table, last
sentence: insert “ Prefix” before “-SID”.