Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08-opsdir-early-romascanu-2021-06-24-01
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2021-06-20 | |
Requested | 2021-05-25 | |
Requested by | Susan Hares | |
Authors | Gaurav Dawra , Clarence Filsfils , Ketan Talaulikar , Mach Chen , Daniel Bernier , Bruno Decraene | |
I-D last updated | 2021-06-24 | |
Completed reviews |
Opsdir Early review of -08
by Dan Romascanu
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Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Adrian Farrel (diff) Secdir Early review of -09 by Stephen Farrell (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -12 by Timothy Winters (diff) |
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Comments |
This is an early review. Routing Directorate - please look at compared to Spring Documents and BGP-LS issues Ops Directorate - please examine for operational issues Internet Directorate - Please look at for SRV6 issues. Thank you. |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext by Ops Directorate Overtaken by Events | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/EEcSgiBHL8VRlbzXBrf7tQ8S6vM | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2021-06-24 |
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08-opsdir-early-romascanu-2021-06-24-01
Ready with one editorial comment. The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS and also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My principal editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references to the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the life easier for future users of the document. I appreciate Section 10 of the document which describes the operations and manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is the section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other documents.