Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08-opsdir-early-romascanu-2021-06-24-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-06-20
Requested 2021-05-25
Requested by Susan Hares
Authors Gaurav Dawra, Clarence Filsfils, Ketan Talaulikar, Mach Chen, Daniel Bernier, Bruno Decraene
Draft last updated 2021-06-24
Completed reviews Opsdir Early review of -08 by Dan Romascanu
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Comments
This is an early review. 

Routing Directorate - please look at compared to Spring Documents and BGP-LS issues
Ops Directorate - please examine for operational issues
Internet Directorate - Please look at for SRV6 issues. 

Thank you.
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08-opsdir-early-romascanu-2021-06-24
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/EEcSgiBHL8VRlbzXBrf7tQ8S6vM
Reviewed rev. 08
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2021-06-24

Review
review-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08-opsdir-early-romascanu-2021-06-24

Ready with one editorial comment.

The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS and
also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My principal
editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references to
the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the life
easier for future users of the document.

I appreciate Section 10 of the document which describes the operations and
manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is the
section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks
short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other
documents.