Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 09)|
|Team||Ops Directorate (opsdir)|
|Requested by||Susan Hares|
|Authors||Gaurav Dawra, Clarence Filsfils, Ketan Talaulikar, Mach Chen, Daniel Bernier, Bruno Decraene|
|Draft last updated||2021-06-24|
Opsdir Early review of -08 by Dan Romascanu
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
This is an early review. Routing Directorate - please look at compared to Spring Documents and BGP-LS issues Ops Directorate - please examine for operational issues Internet Directorate - Please look at for SRV6 issues. Thank you.
|Reviewed rev.||08 (document currently at 09)|
|The information below is for an old version of the document|
Ready with one editorial comment. The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS and also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My principal editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references to the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the life easier for future users of the document. I appreciate Section 10 of the document which describes the operations and manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is the section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other documents.