Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-ext-opt-param-07
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 07)|
|Team||Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)|
|Requested by||Susan Hares|
|Draft last updated||2019-09-14|
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Matthew Bocci
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Joel Halpern
Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-foo-name/ The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the stage that the document has reached. <case 1> As this document has recently been adopted by the working group, my focus for the review is on providing a new perspective on the work, with the intention of catching any issues early on in the document's life cycle. <case 2> As this document is in working group last call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document is ready to be published. Please consider my comments along with the other working group last call comments. <case 3> If neither of the above describes the circumstances of the review, then write a brief summary of the reasons for and purpose of the review here (get this from the WG chair if you are not sure). For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Document: draft-ietf-idr-ext-opt-param-07 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 25-Sept-2019 Intended Status: Proposed Standard Summary: No issues found. This documents is ready to proceed to the IESG. Major Comments: N/A Minor Comments: N/A Nits: You might consider replacing "this" in "the value of this field" in the 2nd from last paragraph of section 2. I knew what it had to refer to, but it stalled me and caused me to recheck the grammar twice before I was sure it said what it needed to say. It may confuse some readers.