Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-
review-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-genart-lc-barnes-2011-11-30-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2011-12-12 | |
| Requested | 2011-11-29 | |
| Authors | Jie Dong , Mach Chen , Anantharamu Suryanarayana | |
| I-D last updated | 2011-11-30 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Mary Barnes
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Warren "Ace" Kumari |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Mary Barnes |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Completed | 2011-11-30 |
review-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-genart-lc-barnes-2011-11-30-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-02 Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 30 November 2011 IETF LC End Date: 12 December 2011 Summary: Ready with nits Nits: ---- - There are articles (e.g., "the") missing in quite a few of the sentences, however, the RFC editor should be able to easily fix those.