Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04
review-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04-genart-lc-dupont-2014-04-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-04-03
Requested 2014-03-20
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of -07 by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by David Harrington (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -03 by Gunter Van de Velde (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04-genart-lc-dupont-2014-04-07
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09959.html
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 07)
Review result Not Ready
Draft last updated 2014-04-07
Review completed: 2014-04-07

Review
review-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04-genart-lc-dupont-2014-04-07

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140401
IETF LC End Date: 20130403
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: there is a typo in the IANA considerations, i.e., the
heart of the document. It seems to be a trivial typo but there is no
proof of this...

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 Appendix A page 4: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: the typo looks like a bad cut & paste between versions 03 and 04.
If (/when?) this is confirmed by authors I'll change summary to Ready
and the typo from major issue to editorial.