Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04
review-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04-genart-lc-dupont-2014-04-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-04-03 | |
Requested | 2014-03-20 | |
Authors | Jeffrey Haas , Jon Mitchell | |
I-D last updated | 2014-04-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Francis Dupont
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Francis Dupont Secdir Last Call review of -04 by David Harrington (diff) Opsdir Early review of -03 by Gunter Van de Velde (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | Not ready | |
Completed | 2014-04-07 |
review-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04-genart-lc-dupont-2014-04-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140401 IETF LC End Date: 20130403 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Not Ready Major issues: there is a typo in the IANA considerations, i.e., the heart of the document. It seems to be a trivial typo but there is no proof of this... Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Appendix A page 4: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr PS: the typo looks like a bad cut & paste between versions 03 and 04. If (/when?) this is confirmed by authors I'll change summary to Ready and the typo from major issue to editorial.