Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05
review-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05-genart-lc-bryant-2023-07-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-07-13
Requested 2023-06-29
Authors Jim Uttaro , Enke Chen , Bruno Decraene , John Scudder
I-D last updated 2023-07-12
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Valery Smyslov
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Bo Wu (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -02 by Mike McBride (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 06)
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Completed 2023-07-12
review-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05-genart-lc-bryant-2023-07-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2023-07-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:This is a well written document ready for publication.

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:

   We update RFC 6368 by specifying that the LLGR_STALE community must
SB> Perhaps “this memo updates”
   be propagated into, or out of, the path attributes exchanged between
   PE and CE.

This would probably address the ID-Nits complaint.