Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10
review-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-05-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-04-08 | |
Requested | 2015-03-19 | |
Authors | Hannes Gredler , Jan Medved , Stefano Previdi , Adrian Farrel , Saikat Ray | |
I-D last updated | 2015-05-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10
by Alexey Melnikov
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Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Matthew A. Miller (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Carlos Pignataro (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Acee Lindem (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 13) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-05-10 |
review-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-05-10-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2015-05-10 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-08 IESG Telechat date: N/A My apologies for the late review of this document. Summary: Ready with nits Minor (but some of these might be more serious): In 6.2.2: If an implementation of BGP-LS detects a malformed attribute, then it SHOULD use the ’Attribute Discard’ action as per [I-D.ietf-idr-error-handling] Section 2. This needs to be a Normative reference. Or you can keep it as Informative, if you change the sentence not to use RFC 2119 language. In 3.3.1.1 - does this need a new IANA registry? (I am fine if you think you don't). In 3.3.1.3/3.3.2.7 - what is "subset of the FQDN"? In 3.3.2.3: The TE Default Metric TLV carries the TE-metric for this link. The length of this TLV is fixed at 4 octets. I am probably showing my ignorance, but is the term "TE-metric" defined somewhere? The description below suggests it has substructure, which I don't know anything about. If a source protocol (e.g. IS-IS) does not support a Metric width of 32 bits then the high order octet MUST be set to zero. Best Regards, Alexey