Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-
review-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-06-27-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-06-15 | |
| Requested | 2012-06-07 | |
| Authors | Quaizar Vohra , Enke Chen | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-06-27 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by
Christer Holmberg
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Christer Holmberg Secdir Early review of -?? by Catherine Meadows |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-06-27
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| Completed | 2012-06-27 |
review-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-06-27-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2012-06-12 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-15 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial nits. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: GENERAL: Q_GEN-1: Sometimes the text says "AS number", and sometimes "Autonomous System number". Please use consistant terminology. Q_GEN-2: Sometimes the text says "2-octet", and sometimes "two-octet". Please use consistant terminology. Q_GEN-3: Sometimes the text says "4-octet", and sometimes "four-octet". Please use consistant terminology. SECTION 4.2.1: Q_4_2_1-1: I suggest to replace "OLD one" with "OLD BGP speaker". Regards, Christer