Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-
review-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-06-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-06-15
Requested 2012-06-07
Authors Quaizar Vohra , Enke Chen
I-D last updated 2012-06-27
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Christer Holmberg
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Christer Holmberg
Secdir Early review of -?? by Catherine Meadows
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Completed 2012-06-27
review-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-06-27-00
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document:                             draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06.txt
Reviewer:                               Christer Holmberg
Review Date:                          2012-06-12
IETF LC End Date:                   2012-06-15
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:  The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial
nits.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:

GENERAL:

Q_GEN-1: Sometimes the text says "AS number", and sometimes "Autonomous System
number". Please use consistant terminology.

Q_GEN-2: Sometimes the text says "2-octet", and sometimes "two-octet". Please
use consistant terminology.

Q_GEN-3: Sometimes the text says "4-octet", and sometimes "four-octet". Please
use consistant terminology.

SECTION 4.2.1:

Q_4_2_1-1: I suggest to replace "OLD one" with "OLD BGP speaker".

Regards,

Christer