Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-route-oscillation-stop-02

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-route-oscillation-stop
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-04-29
Requested 2016-04-14
Authors Daniel Walton, Alvaro Retana, Enke Chen, John Scudder
Draft last updated 2016-04-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Jon Mitchell (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -00 by Tony Przygienda (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by He Jia (diff)
Assignment Reviewer He Jia
State Completed
Review review-ietf-idr-route-oscillation-stop-02-rtgdir-early-jia-2016-04-29
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 04)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-04-29




I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related

as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information

the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir


Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF
 Last Call 

comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.


Document: draft-ietf-idr-route-oscillation-stop-02.txt

Reviewer: Jia He

Review Date: 27 April 2016

IETF LC End Date:  29 April 2016

Intended Status: Standards Track




This draft is clearly written and solves a specific issue. I think it is ready for publication.


Major Issues:




Through the whole draft

s/topological constrains/topological constraints