Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-rpd-14
review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-rpd-14
Requested revision 14 (document currently at 16)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2022-01-31
Requested 2021-12-11
Requested by Keyur Patel
Authors Zhenbin Li , Liang Ou , Yujia Luo , Gyan Mishra , Huaimo Chen , Haibo Wang
I-D last updated 2022-01-31
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -14 by Himanshu C. Shah (diff)
Secdir Early review of -15 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Comments 
Please review.
Assignment Reviewer Himanshu C. Shah
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/C8PSoiyHCCYApTLaBdsl4dW0Vp8
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-01-31
review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31-00
The document is written well.

I am glad it covers the the precedence of static routing policy  against the
signaled routing policy. It would be good if the example would use the explicit
address range to explain; (for example - 1.1.1.0 to 1.1.1.255),  in section
4.2.1.

I was asked to review version 14 and have not checked the delta between the
latest version 15.