Telechat Review of draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-26
review-ietf-insipid-session-id-26-genart-telechat-davies-2016-08-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-insipid-session-id |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 27) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-08-16 | |
Requested | 2016-08-11 | |
Authors | Paul Jones , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Chris Pearce , Paul Giralt | |
I-D last updated | 2016-08-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -24
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -26 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-insipid-session-id by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 26 (document currently at 27) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2016-08-12 |
review-ietf-insipid-session-id-26-genart-telechat-davies-2016-08-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Document: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-26.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2016/08/12 IETF LC End Date: 2016/08/04 IESG Telechat date: 2016/08/18 Summary: (2nd Last Call and Telechat) Almost ready. The points from my review of -24 in the first Last Call have all been addressed - thanks - with the exception of the location of the key definitions of "session id" and "communication session". The latest version (-26) refers the reader to RFC 7206 which needs to be a normative reference but is an Informational RFC, creating a downref. I cannot see that a requirements document meets the criteria for an allowable downref as described in Section 2 of RFC 3967. Reproducing the two definitions in the new draft (and ensuring that they are accurate for the standards document) seems to be a better solution IMO. Major issues: None Minor issues: Downref to RFC 7206 - see above. Editorial/Nits: Missing definitions of "session id" and "communication session" - see above.