Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2019-07-21-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2019-07-19 | |
Requested | 2019-06-21 | |
Requested by | Alvaro Retana | |
Authors | Ron Bonica , Fred Baker , Geoff Huston , Bob Hinden , Ole Trøan , Fernando Gont | |
I-D last updated | 2019-07-21 | |
Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -10
by Tim Chown
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Tsvart Early review of -09 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Pete Resnick (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stig Venaas (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Zitao Wang (diff) |
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Comments |
Focus on any potential impact to work in the RTG area. Thanks! |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Stig Venaas |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/0AOficFuFat78XZ7WMH5J8YR-Bc | |
Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 17) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2019-07-21 |
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2019-07-21-00
Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15.txt Reviewer: Stig Venaas Review Date: 19 July 2019 IETF LC End Date: 19 July 2019 Intended Status: Best Current Practice Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication. Comments: The document is in great shape. It is easy to read and of good quality. Major Issues: No major issues found. Minor Issues: No minor issues found. Nits: I noticed that in section 2.1 the word "While" is spelled "Whlie". Regards, Stig