Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-08-22-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2019-07-04 | |
Requested | 2019-06-20 | |
Authors | Ron Bonica , Fred Baker , Geoff Huston , Bob Hinden , Ole Trøan , Fernando Gont | |
I-D last updated | 2019-08-22 | |
Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -10
by Tim Chown
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Tsvart Early review of -09 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff) Genart Last Call review of -13 by Pete Resnick (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stig Venaas (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Zitao Wang (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Zitao Wang |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/_1pzUKCr_RcNalzUrPxAuorIGKw | |
Reviewed revision | 15 (document currently at 17) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2019-08-22 |
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-08-22-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: This document describes IP fragmentation and explains how it introduces fragility to Internet communication. It also proposes alternatives to IP fragmentation and provides recommendations for developers and network operators. This document is ready from an Ops Directorate viewpoint. Best Regards! -Michael