Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains-09
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Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191220
IETF LC End Date: 20191225
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
- 3.1 page 6: the real purpose of the R-flag / inclusion of a RA header
could be explained before examples of section 5, for instance in the
- 3.4 page 10,3.4.3 page 11 (3 times) and 6 page 22 : e.g. -> e.g.,
- 4.4 page 17: I understand the text about the Subject Name (so it
is not a minor issue) but RFC 5280 defines the Subject as a X.500
Distinguished Name so IMHO you mean the Subject Alternative Name.
I propose to add "(Alternative)" between "Subject" and "Name" so
the text should become fully correct without introducing extra /
- 8.3 page 24: Bit position 0, 1 and 2 are reserved -> assigned
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