Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08
review-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-06-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-06-28
Requested 2013-06-14
Authors Paul Aitken , Benoît Claise , Brian Trammell
I-D last updated 2020-01-21 (Latest revision 2013-07-11)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Brian Weis (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Kathleen Moriarty
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-06-14
review-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08-genart-lc-moriarty-2013-06-14-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ipfix-protocol-rfc5101bis-08
Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty
Review Date: June 15, 2013
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Summary:   The draft is well written and ready for publication.  There is at
least one idnit that should be corrected, but should be fine for the Auth48
process.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:  From idnits, the first 2 should be fine:

    (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
     to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)

  -- Possible downref: Normative reference to a draft: ref. 'RFC5102bis'

  -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'IPFIX-IANA'

  == Outdated reference: A later version (-04) exists of
     draft-ietf-ipfix-mediation-protocol-03

Sorry this took a while, my travel schedule has been hectic.