Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03
review-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03-opsdir-lc-bradner-2015-08-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-2680-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-08-11
Requested 2015-08-03
Draft last updated 2015-08-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Bradner
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03-opsdir-lc-bradner-2015-08-13
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-08-13

Review
review-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03-opsdir-lc-bradner-2015-08-13

I was asked to do an OPS-DIR review of draft-ietf-ippm-2680-bis-03.

This document is a revision of RFC 2680 which described a one-way loss 
metric for use in the Internet.  As such, it does not present any direct operational 
concerns, but, if the metric can be improved, it can assist in better 
understanding network operations.

That said, I do have a suggestion on the document itself.

The first thing I do when looking at a bis document is to go to the 
Changes since RFC XXXX section. I did that in this case and was 
quite confused with what I found.

The first part of section 7 is a list of points from RFC 7290 but the text does
not say what was changed in the bis text to meet these suggestions.

I would suggest removing this list of suggestions from RFC 7290 and instead include
a note about RFC 7290 within the note about the specific updates where it applies 
(xx changed in response to the 1st suggestion in section 6.2.3 of RFC 7290 to read "xxx xxx xxx”)

Scott