Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option-09
review-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option-09-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2017-04-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-04-11
Requested 2017-03-17
Authors Nalini Elkins , Rob Hamilton , michael ackermann
I-D last updated 2017-04-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-04-11
review-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option-09-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2017-04-11-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This Standards Track document specifics a new Performance and Diagnostic
Metrics (PDM) destination option, also the layout, field limits, calculations,
and usage of the PDM in measurement. This document is well written. It is ready
to be published. I don't find any major or minor issues.