Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-04-11
Requested 2017-03-17
Authors Nalini Elkins, Rob Hamilton,
Draft last updated 2017-04-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option-09-opsdir-telechat-jiang-2017-04-11
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-04-11


I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This Standards Track document specifics a new Performance and Diagnostic Metrics (PDM) destination option, also the layout, field limits, calculations, and usage of the PDM in measurement. This document is well written. It is ready to be published. I don't find any major or minor issues.