Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-24
Requested 2015-12-14
Authors Al Morton
Draft last updated 2015-12-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-12-16
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 06)
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2015-12-16


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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2015-12-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-24
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Summary: Almost ready

Minor Issue:

   We note that [I-D.chen-ippm-coloring-based-ipfpm-framework] proposes
   a method similar to [I-D.tempia-opsawg-p3m], and ippm-list discussion
   indicates [I-D.chen-ippm-coloring-based-ipfpm-framework] may be
   covered by the same IPR as [I-D.tempia-opsawg-p3m].

I suggest removing the IPR comment. It may be an issue, but not for this
draft. We generally avoid taking a position on IPR applicablity (in fact,
our lawyer tells us not to do so).