Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02
review-ietf-ippm-ioam-deployment-02-intdir-telechat-zuniga-2022-12-11-00

This document is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC, with
some nits.

Comments:

The document is well written, clear, and helpful to understand the IOAM
framework. Sections 1-6 explain the different concepts and aspects of IOAM,
section 7 provides some important considerations to be taken into account when
deploying IOAM (perhaps the main section), section 8 provides some IOAM
management recommendations, and finally section 10 provides an analysis of
possible security threats and mitigations.

Nits:

- The draft's intended status is Informational. However, the Abstract mentions
that the document provides a framework and discusses best current practices.
Since the intended status is not BCP, I would suggest changing the sentence to
something like "provides a framework and describes important IOAM deployment
considerations,"

- Section 7 is introduced as "discussing aspects of IOAM." Although the
section's scope is indeed very wide, I would suggest changing the text to
something more descriptive and representative of the importance of this
section, like "describes several concepts of IOAM, and provides considerations
that need to be taken to account when implementing IOAM in a network domain."