Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08
review-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2022-06-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-06-14
Requested 2022-05-31
Authors Haoyu Song , Barak Gafni , Frank Brockners , Shwetha Bhandari , Tal Mizrahi
I-D last updated 2022-06-10
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -06 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -09 by Bernie Volz (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/m07v8unYsWcCi5915l1WgX1ENL0
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-06-10
review-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2022-06-10-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2022-06-10
IETF LC End Date: 2022-06-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 10], Section 6, encpsulating --> encapsulating