IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-integrity-yang-06
review-ietf-ippm-ioam-integrity-yang-06-yangdoctors-lc-ma-2026-04-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-integrity-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team YANG Doctors (yangdoctors)
Deadline 2026-04-23
Requested 2026-04-10
Requested by Mohamed Boucadair
Authors Justin Iurman , Tianran Zhou
I-D last updated 2026-08-07 (Latest revision 2026-05-08)
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -04 by Qiufang Ma (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -06 by Qiufang Ma (diff)
Intdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Satoru Matsushima (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Corey Bonnell (diff)
Comments 
I remmeber that all comments raised in the early review were addressed, but just to record the latest outcome. Please assign Qiufang Ma as reviewer. Thank you.
Assignment Reviewer Qiufang Ma
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-integrity-yang by YANG Doctors Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/yang-doctors/4MHdv_VUapYCsq6HSBwl47ymBmo
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2026-04-17
review-ietf-ippm-ioam-integrity-yang-06-yangdoctors-lc-ma-2026-04-17-00
Hi, authors, WG,

This is my second review of this document. Thanks to the authors for addressing
my previous comments. The document now is in good shape, IMO.

NIT:
This document defines a YANG data model for the management of these
Integrity-Protected Options using the YANG data modeling language [RFC7950].

This contains redundant expression, maybe:
This document defines a YANG data model [RFC7950] for the management of these
Integrity-Protected Options.

Best Regards,
Qiufang