Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-05
review-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-05-genart-telechat-davies-2014-09-12-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ippm-lmap-path |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2014-08-28 | |
| Authors | Marcelo Bagnulo , Trevor Burbridge , Sam Crawford , Philip Eardley , Al Morton | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-09-12 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by
Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by David Harrington (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -05 by David Harrington (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-05-genart-telechat-davies-2014-09-12
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| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2014-09-12 |
review-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-05-genart-telechat-davies-2014-09-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-lmap-path-05.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 29 August 2014 IETF LC End Date: 22 August 2014 IESG Telechat date: 4 September 2014 Summary: Al Morton has shown me a set of changes that seem to address the points I made in my Last Call review. Assuming they make it into -06 that'll be fine by me. For the record, I didn't have the same problem as Barry and Adrian did with the term 'reference path'. My view was that it looked like a 'reference point' and I know what one of those is. But a little more explanation would doubtless help. Regards, Elwyn