Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11
review-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2017-07-25-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-08-01 | |
| Requested | 2017-07-05 | |
| Authors | Matt Mathis , Al Morton | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-07-25 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -10
by
David Mandelberg
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Robert Sparks (diff) Genart Telechat review of -11 by Robert Sparks (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Robert Sparks |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2017-07-25
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| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2017-07-25 |
review-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2017-07-25-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2017-07-25 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-14 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03 Summary: Ready with nits Thanks for addressing the comments in my review of -10. In the revision (as a side-effect of removing the dependency on 2119, I suspect) you removed the classification of normative vs informative references. I think you mean that all of these references are Informative. (The document would have a References section, with one "Informative References" subsection).