Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11
review-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2017-07-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-08-01
Requested 2017-07-05
Authors Matt Mathis , Al Morton
I-D last updated 2018-12-19 (Latest revision 2017-09-15)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-07-25
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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-model-based-metrics-11
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03

Summary: Ready with nits

Thanks for addressing the comments in my review of -10.
In the revision (as a side-effect of removing the dependency on 2119, I
suspect) you removed the classification of normative vs informative references.
I think you mean that all of these references are Informative. (The document
would have a References section, with one "Informative References" subsection).