Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-07
review-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-07-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-11-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
| Deadline | 2023-11-13 | |
| Requested | 2023-10-23 | |
| Authors | Zhenqiang Li , Tianran Zhou , Guo Jun , Greg Mirsky , Rakesh Gandhi | |
| I-D last updated | 2023-11-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Telechat review of -07
by Timothy Winters
(diff)
Artart Last Call review of -07 by Jean Mahoney (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Steve Hanna (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Stewart Bryant (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jean Mahoney |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/MzzadDve7VnngXF61Rt-a2KTY-I | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2023-11-13 |
review-ietf-ippm-otwamp-on-lag-07-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-11-13-00
Summary: This is a well written draft, and I think it's ready from an Artart perspective. Nits: Section 2. s/estabilished/established Section 3.2. There appears to be a word missing in the following introductory phrase: Current: "When receives a test packet, the micro OWAMP Session-Receiver MUST ..." Perhaps: "When it receives..." Section 5. Subject-verb agreement (s/use/uses): Current: "The micro Session-Sender also use ..."