Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02
review-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2015-09-10-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-09-10 | |
Requested | 2015-08-27 | |
Authors | Al Morton | |
I-D last updated | 2015-09-10 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02
by Roni Even
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Alan DeKok (diff) Opsdir Early review of -02 by Nevil Brownlee (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 03) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2015-09-10 |
review-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02-genart-lc-even-2015-09-10-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015–9-9 IETF LC End Date: 2015–9-10 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost for publication as an Standard Track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: The document registers IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key in section 3.2.4. Why here and not in draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11. I suggest deleting the registration of IKEv2-derived Shared Secret Key from here. Otherwise draft-ietf-ippm-ipsec-11 should be normative reference since the [RFC TBD] depends on it and it may cause a delay in publication and creation of the registry. Nits/editorial comments: In sections 3.1.2 and 3.2.2 the policy should be “IETF review” and not “IETF consensus” according to section 4.1 in RFC5226