Early Review of draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02
review-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02-opsdir-early-brownlee-2015-10-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-10-13
Requested 2015-10-13
Authors Al Morton
Draft last updated 2015-10-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Alan DeKok (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -02 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Nevil Brownlee
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02-opsdir-early-brownlee-2015-10-13
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-10-13

Review
review-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02-opsdir-early-brownlee-2015-10-13

Hi all:

I have performed an Operations Directorate review of
   draft-ietf-ippm-owamp-registry-02

  "This memo describes the registries for OWAMP - the One-Way Active
   Measurement Protocol.  The registries allow assignment of MODE bit
   positions and OWAMP Command numbers.  The memo also requests that
   IANA establish the registries for new features, called the OWAMP-
   Modes registry and the OWAMP Control Command Number registry.  This
   memo updates RFC 4656."

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The abstract (above) explains exactly what this draft is all about.
It's well-written and clear, I believe it's ready for publication now.


Of course, I found a few tiny nits - these could be fixed in any
future revision:

section 2:     s/already administrates/already administers/
section 3.1:   s/create a OWAMP-COntrol/create an OWAMP-COntrol/
section 3.1.1: s/Commands Numbers/Command Numbers/

Cheers, Nevil
Ex Co-chair, EMAN WG (now closed)
Ex Co-chair, IPFIX WG (now closed)

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