Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07
review-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-05-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-05-02
Requested 2014-04-24
Draft last updated 2014-05-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-05-06
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-05-06

Review
review-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-05-06

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140428
IETF LC End Date: 20140503
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - in Toc page 2 and 6 (title) page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 5 page 8: compability -> compatibility

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: I have no expert opinion (as not being an expert, i.e., a cryptographer)
about the backgound of requirement changes. Nevertheless they seems
to be in phase with one can find in current publications...