Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07
review-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-05-06-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-05-02 | |
Requested | 2014-04-24 | |
Authors | David McGrew , Paul E. Hoffman | |
I-D last updated | 2014-05-06 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by Francis Dupont
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-05-06 |
review-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07-genart-lc-dupont-2014-05-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-esp-ah-reqts-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140428 IETF LC End Date: 20140503 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - in Toc page 2 and 6 (title) page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 5 page 8: compability -> compatibility Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr PS: I have no expert opinion (as not being an expert, i.e., a cryptographer) about the backgound of requirement changes. Nevertheless they seems to be in phase with one can find in current publications...