Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08
review-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08-artart-lc-housley-2022-10-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2022-11-07
Requested 2022-10-10
Authors C. Tjhai , M. Tomlinson , G. Bartlett , Scott Fluhrer , Daniel Van Geest , Oscar Garcia-Morchon , Valery Smyslov
I-D last updated 2022-10-26
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -07 by Geoff Huston (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Sean Turner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/vuHfHEaOT8HvzHwHpnCNw23T_PM
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-10-26
review-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08-artart-lc-housley-2022-10-26-00
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. I also did a Gen-ART
review of the previous version of this document.  Please treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.


Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2022-10-26
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2022-12-01


Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None

Nits:

Section 3.1: s/IKE; however IKE_INIT/IKE; however, IKE_INIT/


Note:
   
I did not review the Appendix.

All of the comments from the Gen-ART review were addressed.  Thanks.