Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17
review-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17-genart-telechat-resnick-2017-03-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-14
Requested 2017-02-14
Authors Yoav Nir , Tero Kivinen , Paul Wouters , Daniel Migault
I-D last updated 2017-03-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Susan Hares (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -17 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Pete Resnick
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17-genart-telechat-resnick-2017-03-15
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 18)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-03-15
review-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17-genart-telechat-resnick-2017-03-15-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2017-03-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary:

Ready

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

While using MUST, SHOULD, and MAY as nouns and adjectives causes me a twitch,
this document is just fine. There's a typo in the first paragraph of 1.2.