Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17
review-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17-genart-telechat-resnick-2017-03-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 18) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-03-14 | |
| Requested | 2017-02-14 | |
| Authors | Yoav Nir , Tero Kivinen , Paul Wouters , Daniel Migault | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-03-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -15
by Pete Resnick
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Susan Hares (diff) Genart Telechat review of -17 by Pete Resnick (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Pete Resnick |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 17 (document currently at 18) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2017-03-15 |
review-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17-genart-telechat-resnick-2017-03-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2017-03-15 IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31 IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: While using MUST, SHOULD, and MAY as nouns and adjectives causes me a twitch, this document is just fine. There's a typo in the first paragraph of 1.2.