Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04
review-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-10-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-10-11
Requested 2016-09-21
Authors Yoav Nir, Simon Josefsson
Draft last updated 2016-10-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Orit Levin (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tim Wicinski 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-10-12
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-10-12

Review
review-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-10-12

Hi

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational


aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call 


may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors 


and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call 


comments.




Document Reviewed: draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves

Status: Ready, with version -05



Summary:  This draft was ready, and there were a few editorial changes, 


but it appears that version -05 fixed the ones I saw (plus a few others 


I had not).  I will say that this reads much cleaner and is ready for 


publication.




thanks
tim