Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04
review-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-10-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2016-10-11 | |
Requested | 2016-09-21 | |
Authors | Yoav Nir , Simon Josefsson | |
I-D last updated | 2016-10-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Orit Levin
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tim Wicinski (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Tim Wicinski |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-10-12 |
review-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves-04-opsdir-lc-wicinski-2016-10-12-00
Hi I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document Reviewed: draft-ietf-ipsecme-safecurves Status: Ready, with version -05 Summary: This draft was ready, and there were a few editorial changes, but it appears that version -05 fixed the ones I saw (plus a few others I had not). I will say that this reads much cleaner and is ready for publication. thanks tim