Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06
review-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06-genart-lc-halpern-2022-07-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-08-04
Requested 2022-07-14
Authors Don Fedyk , Christian Hopps
I-D last updated 2022-07-21
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -01 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/HzETo-2ZxQTq94b5aj8EjHrFt70
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-07-21
review-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06-genart-lc-halpern-2022-07-21-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2022-07-21
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publicaiton as a Proposed standards

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     I think that in augment "/nsfikels:ipsec-ikeless/nsfikels:sad/"
        + "nsfikels:sad-entry" 
     the container ipsec-stats { 
     should have, after if-feature "ipsec-stats";,
   config false;?

Nits/editorial comments: N/A