Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-mi-bis-02

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-mi-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-04-07
Requested 2017-03-17
Authors Les Ginsberg, Stefano Previdi, Wim Henderickx
Draft last updated 2017-04-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Orit Levin (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Al Morton (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joseph Salowey 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-isis-mi-bis-02-secdir-lc-salowey-2017-04-10
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2017-04-10


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document does not explicitly discuss the use-cases for multi instance IS-IS.  Is this intended to be used a security mechanism for isolation?  The document should provide some guidance here.  

If the mechanism is intended as an isolation mechanism for security then I think more guidance is appropriate.   For example, in this case shouldn't each instance have its own authentication configuration?  

If it is not intended as a security mechanism then the document probably say so.