Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-03
review-ietf-isis-pcr-03-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2015-12-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-01-05
Requested 2015-12-12
Authors János Farkas, Nigel Bragg, Paul Unbehagen, Glenn Parsons, Peter Ashwood-Smith, Chris Bowers
Draft last updated 2015-12-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-isis-pcr-03-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2015-12-22
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-12-22

Review
review-ietf-isis-pcr-03-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2015-12-22

Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

Why the Bandwidth Constraint sub-TLV is not same as the Bandwidth Sub-TLV defined by 


https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-isis-te-metric-extensions-07#page-10

?

Need to make sure that the Bandwidth Sub-TLV (unidirectional available bandwidth, unidirectional utilized bandwidth sub-TLV, etc), of draft-ietf-isis-te-metric-extensions is consistent. 

Cheers, 

Linda Dunbar