Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04
review-ietf-isis-pcr-04-genart-lc-krishnan-2016-02-22-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-isis-pcr |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2016-01-05 | |
| Requested | 2015-12-24 | |
| Authors | János Farkas, Nigel Bragg, Paul Unbehagen, Glenn Parsons, Peter Ashwood-Smith, Chris Bowers | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-02-22 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Suresh Krishnan
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Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Rich Salz (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-isis-pcr-04-genart-lc-krishnan-2016-02-22 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
| Review result | Ready with Issues | |
| Review completed: | 2016-02-22 |
Review
review-ietf-isis-pcr-04-genart-lc-krishnan-2016-02-22
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2016-01-05 Telechat Date: 2016-01-07 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have a minor comment that you might wish to address. * Minor There is no reference for the format of the Bandwidth fields in Sections 6.3 and 6.4. I am assuming this refers to the Single Precision format (binary32) from IEEE 754. If so, please add an explicit reference to this. Thanks Suresh