Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
review-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00-genart-lc-romascanu-2013-12-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-24
Requested 2013-12-12
Authors Mike Shand , Les Ginsberg
I-D last updated 2013-12-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -00 by Dan Romascanu
Secdir Last Call review of -00 by Hilarie Orman
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
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Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc1142-to-historic-00
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 12/17/13
IETF LC End Date: 12/24/13
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready

Major issues:

Minor issues:

It may be more cautious refer to the 'latest available' version of the IS-IS
standard as we cannot be completely sure that the Second Edition will also be
the very last one. Suggested change in Section 1:

OLD:

   All references to IS-IS should be to ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
   Edition and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.

NEW:

   All references to IS-IS should be to the latest edition of the IS-IS
   standard (currently ISO/IEC 10589:2002, Second
   Edition) and RFC 1142 is only of historic interest.

Nits/editorial comments: