Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02
review-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2015-11-19-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 02) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2015-11-17 | |
Requested | 2015-11-16 | |
Authors | Les Ginsberg , Nobo Akiya , Mach Chen | |
I-D last updated | 2015-11-19 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -02
by Taylor Yu
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Menachem Dodge Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Nevil Brownlee |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Nevil Brownlee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-11-19 |
review-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2015-11-19-00
Hi all: I have performed an Operations Directorate review of draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02 "This document defines a new optional Intermediate System to Intermediate System (IS-IS) TLV named CAPABILITY, formed of multiple sub-TLVs, which allows a router to announce its capabilities within an IS-IS level or the entire routing domain." - - - - This is a straightforward and clear draft, defining a new IS-IS sub-TLV. I wondered whether routers that didn't know about this might have problems with it, but I see that RFC 4971 covers this well. I also wondered wy this draft doesn't describe how te BFD sub-TLV is laid out in its Value field, but I see that's covered in RFC 5305. So, overall a good document, fit for its intended purpose, and ready for publication. One tiny typo: s2 s/S-BFD Discriminators sub-TLVs are formatted/ S-BFD Discriminator sub-TLVs are formatted/ Cheers, Nevil Co-chair, SUPA WG -- --------------------------------------------------------------------- Nevil Brownlee Computer Science Department Phone: +64 9 373 7599 x88941 The University of Auckland FAX: +64 9 373 7453 Private Bag 92019, Auckland 1142, New Zealand