Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-23
review-ietf-isis-sr-yang-23-genart-lc-sarikaya-2025-01-29-00

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Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2025-01-30
Requested 2025-01-16
Authors Stephane Litkowski , Yingzhen Qu , Acee Lindem , Ing-Wher (Helen) Chen , Jeff Tantsura
I-D last updated 2025-12-09 (Latest revision 2025-05-06)
Completed reviews Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -19 by Reshad Rahman (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -17 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -13 by Jan Lindblad (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -24 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -23 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Behcet Sarikaya
State Completed
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Completed 2025-01-29
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Document: draft-ietf-isis-sr-yang-23
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2025-01-29
IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document develops a YANG data module for the purpose of configuring and
managing

IS-IS segment routing in the MPLS data plane. As such a large part of it
consists of YANG code in Sections 3 and 4.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It has the following nits:

idnits tool says there are 3 long (>72) lines.

Appendix A has not been referenced.

Spell out the acronyms like IS IS-IS, MPLS, etc. in first use.