Last Call Review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37
review-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37-genart-lc-bryant-2019-09-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 42)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-09-23
Requested 2019-09-09
Authors Stephane Litkowski , Derek M. Yeung , Acee Lindem , Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Ladislav Lhotka
I-D last updated 2019-09-18
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -24 by Ebben Aries (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -37 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/B6QuZdE5AalVNtINIAQmOg9M0L4
Reviewed revision 37 (document currently at 42)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-09-18
review-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-37-genart-lc-bryant-2019-09-18-00
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Document: draft-ietf-isis-yang-isis-cfg-??
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2019-09-18
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A true magnum opus. Well written and from a GENART point of view ready
to be published. I have not checked the YANG syntax, and have only checked that
the configuration symantics look plausible. I assume that specalist YANG and
Routing reviewers will look at that detail.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
   This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
   and manage IS-IS protocol on network elements.

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