Telechat Review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-09
review-ietf-jmap-smime-09-genart-telechat-yee-2021-10-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-10-19
Requested 2021-10-07
Authors Alexey Melnikov
I-D last updated 2021-10-17
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -08 by Kirsty Paine (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-jmap-smime by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/e9YCSvNOo8K_sWmIJiENbAFn-IQ
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-10-17
review-ietf-jmap-smime-09-genart-telechat-yee-2021-10-17-00
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Document: draft-ietf-jmap-smime-09
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2021-10-17
IETF LC End Date: 2021-10-18
IESG Telechat date: 2021-10-21

Summary: This document provides a JMAP extension that allows the JMAP server to
provide its thoughts on the verification of a message's S/MIME signature. My
concerns over -07 have been addressed in the subsequent versions of the draft.
[Ready with nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 2, section 1, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change "JSON based" to
"JSON-based".

Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change "client side" to
"client-side".