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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jose-cookbook-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-jose-cookbook
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-12-16
Requested 2014-11-18
Authors Matthew A. Miller
I-D last updated 2014-12-17
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-jose-cookbook-06-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2014-12-17
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-12-17
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational 

area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other last call comments.

I found the document be ready for publication. There are no operational 

or management concerns in a document like this.

Few minor nits & comments:

o IDnits spits out warnings. I recon all of them are of kind that will 

be corrected by t he RFC Editor -> no worries.

o The document uses example domains "hobbiton.example" and alike. 

According to RFC2606 & 6761 the example domains are "" etc. 

These should be corrected UNLESS they cause too much trouble 

regenerating outputs into examples...

o line 325 "coordiates" should probably be "coordinates".

o I would take acronyms (e.g. "(JWS)") away from the abstract.

- jouni