Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jose-cookbook-06
review-ietf-jose-cookbook-06-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2014-12-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-jose-cookbook
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-12-16
Requested 2014-11-18
Authors Matthew Miller
Draft last updated 2014-12-17
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-jose-cookbook-06-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2014-12-17
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-12-17

Review
review-ietf-jose-cookbook-06-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2014-12-17

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.


These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational 


area directors.




Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other last call comments.



I found the document be ready for publication. There are no operational 


or management concerns in a document like this.




Few minor nits & comments:



o IDnits spits out warnings. I recon all of them are of kind that will 


be corrected by t he RFC Editor -> no worries.






o The document uses example domains "hobbiton.example" and alike. 


According to RFC2606 & 6761 the example domains are "example.com" etc. 


These should be corrected UNLESS they cause too much trouble 


regenerating outputs into examples...




o line 325 "coordiates" should probably be "coordinates".

o I would take acronyms (e.g. "(JWS)") away from the abstract.

- jouni