Last Call Review of draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06
review-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06-genart-lc-housley-2023-05-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-05-22
Requested 2023-05-08
Authors Carsten Bormann , Tim Bray
I-D last updated 2023-05-12
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Mike Ounsworth (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Mike Ounsworth (diff)
Artart Early review of -03 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/0VU3EPx8yapEzgPbDvCMRFvwS5I
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2023-05-12
review-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06-genart-lc-housley-2023-05-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2023-05-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-22
IESG Telechat date: unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns: None.


Minor Concerns:

Section 3: A reference to ABNF is needed.  Since %s is being used,
I believe that a reference to RFC 7405 is required.  Alternatively,
the paragraph in Section 1.1 could be moved to Section 3.


Nits:

Section 3.1: s/_checking_/checking/