Last Call Review of draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04
review-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-06-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-07-03 | |
| Requested | 2015-06-11 | |
| Authors | Uma Chunduri , Albert Tian , Wenhu Lu | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-06-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Brian E. Carpenter
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Genart Last Call review of -06 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Almost ready | |
| Completed | 2015-06-13 |
review-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-06-13-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-karp-isis-analysis-04.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2015-06-13 IETF LC End Date: 2015-07-03 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Almost ready -------- Minor Issue: ------------ > 3.2. Key Management Protocols I don't like the references to expired drafts. These drafts almost have the flavour of normative references, since apparently they described recommended mitigation techniques. If they matter, they should be properly available. draft-weis-gdoi-mac-tek-03 draft-yeung-g-ikev2-08 draft-hartman-karp-mrkmp-05