Telechat Review of draft-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-08
Requested 2012-12-14
Authors Mahesh Jethanandani, Keyur Patel, Lianshu Zheng
Draft last updated 2012-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis-06-genart-telechat-campbell-2012-12-19
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-12-19


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Document: draft-ietf-karp-routing-tcp-analysis-07
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2012-12-18
IESG Telechat date: 2012-12-20

Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC. There are still a couple of nits that might be worth consideration prior to final publication.

Note: This review is incremental to my review of version 05 at last call. All of my comments in that review have been resolved except as described in this message.

** Major issues:


** Minor issues:


** Nits/editorial comments:

-- The 2119 paragraph was removed, but there's still an orphaned 2119 entry in the informational reference section.

-- There's a new IANA considerations section. However, I suggest it contain a full sentence to the effect of "This document makes no requests of IANA" rather than simply "None".  (OTOH, this may get removed before final publication anyway...)