Last Call Review of draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
review-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04-genart-lc-halpern-2015-01-28-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-02-09 | |
Requested | 2015-01-28 | |
Authors | Benjamin Kaduk | |
I-D last updated | 2015-01-28 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Joel M. Halpern
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-01-28 |
review-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04-genart-lc-halpern-2015-01-28-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04 Structure of the GSS Negotiation Loop Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 28-January-2015 IETF LC End Date: 9-February-2015 IESG Telechat date: n/a Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Section 3.4 paragraph 2: "It is likely appropriate for the acceptor to report this error condition to the acceptor via the application's communication channel." I presume that should be reported to the initiator?