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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-02
review-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-02-genart-lc-sparks-2016-10-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-11-02
Requested 2016-10-20
Authors Larry Zhu , Paul J. Leach , Sam Hartman , Shawn M Emery
I-D last updated 2016-10-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tim Wicinski
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2016-10-21
review-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-02-genart-lc-sparks-2016-10-21-00
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Document: draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-02
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 21 Oct 2016
IETF LC End Date: 2 Nov 2016
IESG Telechat date: Not yet scheduled on a telechat

Summary: Ready with nits

Nits/editorial comments:

Shouldn't the IANA considerations instruct IANA to update the registries
at
http://www.iana.org/assignments/kerberos-parameters/kerberos-parameters.xhtml
to update the three rows that currently point to 6112 to point to this
document instead (or at least in addition to 6112)?

Micro-nit: There is a 2119 MUST carried forward from RFC6112 that could
be improved if the group is willing. "Care MUST be taken by the TGS to
not reveal". I would suggest "The TGS MUST NOT reveal...". If you need
to further highlight care, add a sentence that says "Implementers need
to be particularly careful when addressing this requirement." It is a
very small nit - please feel free to ignore it.